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4/20 Class procedures and test run of online software programs

5/11 Paragraph structure #1 'The topic sentence (thesis), the evidence, and the conclusion', and 'Loop Writing'

6/15 Paragraph structure #2 'Labels' and doing a rewrite.

6/29 Member vs. Leader: Mind-Mapping, 'the Straw-Man', and compound sentences.

7/13 Rewrite of Member vs. Leader: Peer Review ( and summer vacation homework assignment )

9/14 Money and Success: An introduction leading into the thesis.

10/12 (A) 10/19 (B) Rewrite of 'Money and Success' and challenge to try an 'introduction into a thesis.'

10/26 (A) 11/2 (B) Changes in the 21st Century: Brainstorming together, and a small survey.

11/9 (A) 11/16 (B) Rewrite of 'Changes in the 21st Century': Let's watch Mr. Walsh revise.

1/18 (B) 1/25 (A) 'Zero One Zero' and the Given/New Principle.

2/1 (B) 2/8 (A) Changes in our School: Focus on Words of Transition

2/22 (B) 3/1 (A) Final rewrite (Changes in our school), and final BBS assignment.












Redundancy (余剰性) and Paraphrasing(言い換え)